My family

10/5/2013

6 Comments

Cybele

This is my mom, in some accounts, she adopted me but I like to think she's my real mom.

Gordias

This is my father. I inherited the throne of Phrygia from him.

Zeus

It has been said that Zeus is the father of my dad, Gordias, so I guess he's my grandfather.

Queen Demodike

Demodike (aka Hermodike) was the queen of Kyme and my wife.

Marigold

My amazing daughter, Marigold. I love her the most.

6 Comments

narissa

10/7/2013 11:11:23 pm

like:
use of pictures
descriptive wording
use of an extra page

needs improvement:
who is real birth mother?
what do the in his family tree mean? who are they?

Jenny link

10/7/2013 11:13:01 pm

I like how you have gone out of your way and gave us more family members to learn about, however, I'd like to know more about your relationship with them, such as: Is your relationship positive? What kind of gods/goddesses are they? C:

narissa

10/7/2013 11:14:29 pm

Likes:
long descriotive paragraphs
needs improvment:
how was his daughter returned to normal?

Katarina

10/8/2013 09:48:16 am

I liked how you had a lot of family members. My suggestion is to add more description on at least 2-3 members.

Janine

10/8/2013 08:26:40 pm

I really like the use of all the pictures. You managed to find a picture for each which is really good visually. But I would suggest just a bit more detail. For example, it says "My amazing daughter, Marigold. I love her the most." Why does he love her the most? Involve a few personal thoughts.

lillie

12/4/2017 12:18:59 pm

i like how you listed the family

My family

Leave a Reply.

Author

Archives

Categories